写作手册-文法-句子上的错误

句子片段

你可能已经有句子片段的错误。一个句子片段即是不完整的句子。它不表达一个完整的思绪,纵使它以大写字母开头和用一个标点符号结尾。它可能缺少一个主词或动词或两者兼缺乏。

这里有两个例子:

片段: Where there were mice and cockroaches.
片段: A movie that inspires deep emotions.
片段: Analyzing the characters' motives.

这两组字词不能单独作为完整的句子。有两种修改的方式。一种方式是附加片段至一个完整的句子:

修改后的句子: Peter left the apartment where there were mice and cockroaches.
修改后的句子: I went to see "The Silver Star," a movie that inspires deep emotions.
修改后的句子: Analyzing the characters' motives is central to understanding a novel.

另一种修改的方式是添加一个完整的主题,完整的动词,或其它的字以表达一个完整的思绪:

修改后的句子: This is where there were mice and cockroaches.
修改后的句子: A movie that inspires deep emotions is rare.
修改后的句子: Analyzing the characters' motives is important.

总结:句子片段即是不完整的句子。有时候读者可以藉由重读前一个或一个句子来猜测句子片段的意思。可是,修改句子片段使它成为完整的句子可以增进思考逻辑间的关连。您可与您的指导教师请教,以查看您是否需要协助修改句子片段。

注意: 有时候,一个完整的句子可能看似一个子句,因为它在开头的文字群组之遗漏一个逗号。当您用一个从属子句开始一个句子时,请记得在该从属子句之打个逗号。

以下是一个因为错误的标点符号而看似子句的完整句子之例子:

错误: If we have enough time this weekend we'll go to see the cherry trees in bloom.

在此句子中, "...we'll go to see the cherry trees in bloom"是一个可以独立存在的独立子句。"If we have enough time this weekend"是一個不可独立存在的从属子句。使用一个逗号來分开开头的从属子句及独立子句:

正确: If we have enough time this weekend, we'll go to see the cherry trees in bloom.

连写句

您可能有连写句。连写句指的是两个主句之间不用连接词或错用标点的句子。连写句可能使人非常困惑。例如: My sister loves to dance she is very good at it

修改连写句有些不同方式:

1. 把连写句分成两个独立的句子。
 
连写句: My sister loves to dance she is very good at it.
修改后的句子: My sister loves to dance. She is very good at it.

连写句: Jim showed us his ticket someone gave it to him.
修改后的句子: Jim showed us his ticket. Someone gave it to him.

2. 使用对等连接词或标点来连接连写句中的不同部分。以下是常用的对等连接词: and, but, for, nor, or, so, yet。 

连写句: My sister loves to dance she is very good at it.
修改后的句子: My sister loves to dance, and she is very good at it.

连写句: She agreed to chair the meeting she didn't come.
修改后的句子: She agreed to chair the meeting, but she didn't come.

3. 使用从属连词来连接连写句中的不同部分。
以下是常用的从属连词: after, although, as, because, before, if, since, unless, until, when, whereas, while 

连写句: My sister loves to dance she is very good at it.
修改后的句子: My sister loves to dance because she is very good at it.

连写句: Maria and John like skiing Karen does not.
修改后的句子: Although Maria and John like skiing, Karen does not.

4. 使用分号来连接连写句中的不同部分。 

连写句: Gordon laughed at Sandy's joke it was funny.
修改后的句子: Gordon laughed at Sandy's joke; it was funny.

连写句: I thought he was here I was wrong.
修改后的句子: I thought he was here; I was wrong.

总结:连写句指的是两个主句之间不用连接词或错用标点的句子。通常,您可以使用标点符号或连接词来修改句子。若您需要更多指点,您可以请教您的指导教师。使用图尼丁,进行论文查重系统基于:Turnitin CrossCheck ' Thenticate,适用于:毕业论文、留学生Essay、外文投稿;免费赠送检测码以及语法报告,并支持开设电子发票。
 
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